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Re: IG Typos!
(15:58:57) The Barmaid says: "Hourray for Jubilee who just bought a round of beer for us all paying a total of 2 Silver!"
I'm no expert but I think Hourray is spelled incorrectly. It should be Hooray or Hurray.
I'm no expert but I think Hourray is spelled incorrectly. It should be Hooray or Hurray.
Jubilee- Seeker
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In random 'man trapped under snow' encounter:
- Spoiler:
- You quickly pull out the man from under the snow and wrap him in your blanket. Slowly the man warms up and gets back some color while you rub his back firmly. The man shivers and wraps the blanket around his shoulders.
daradle- Seeker
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The snow is smelting, transforming the Battlefield into a huge mudpool.
"Smelting" should be melting, and "mudpool" should be mud pool.
"Smelting" should be melting, and "mudpool" should be mud pool.
Helfdane- Seeker
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Re: IG Typos!
Dried Nuts found on the corpses Squirrels.
Should read "Dries Nuts found on the corpses of Squirrels."
Should read "Dries Nuts found on the corpses of Squirrels."
Helfdane- Seeker
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Re: IG Typos!
When visiting the kitchen in a hotel room:
You are not in Sarmiz at the moment. It is very hard to create a decent dish without proper cooking equipment. Only in your own kitchen, in Sarmiz you can cook meals and soup.
Probably a better phrasing is:
You are not in Sarmiz at the moment. It is very hard to create a decent dish without proper cooking equipment. You can only cook meals and soup in the kitchen at your residence in Sarmiz.
You are not in Sarmiz at the moment. It is very hard to create a decent dish without proper cooking equipment. Only in your own kitchen, in Sarmiz you can cook meals and soup.
Probably a better phrasing is:
You are not in Sarmiz at the moment. It is very hard to create a decent dish without proper cooking equipment. You can only cook meals and soup in the kitchen at your residence in Sarmiz.
daradle- Seeker
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On returning the Rat Infestation quest:
You give the door a firm knock and enter the office of the Grail Captain.
The captain takes your grim trophies and puts them...
(unless you were deliberately referencing Grimm as in the fairy tales?)
You give the door a firm knock and enter the office of the Grail Captain.
The captain takes your grim trophies and puts them...
(unless you were deliberately referencing Grimm as in the fairy tales?)
daradle- Seeker
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On listening to the siren's song:
The mystical voice of the Siren brings you in extase. Time passes by while you listen to her voice! At a certain point you fall unconscious with a smile on your face...
I'm not sure what this is supposed to mean. Ecstasy, maybe? How about:
You stop to listen to the enchanting voice of the Siren. Time passes by while you listen to her voice! Eventually you fall unconscious in ecstasy...
The mystical voice of the Siren brings you in extase. Time passes by while you listen to her voice! At a certain point you fall unconscious with a smile on your face...
I'm not sure what this is supposed to mean. Ecstasy, maybe? How about:
You stop to listen to the enchanting voice of the Siren. Time passes by while you listen to her voice! Eventually you fall unconscious in ecstasy...
daradle- Seeker
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"Each stamina spent creates a chance to find Ingrdients.
With your skills you have 37% chance on success."
(Shoreline herb gathering)
With your skills you have 37% chance on success."
(Shoreline herb gathering)
Sain- Seeker
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Re: IG Typos!
In the event log:
"You placed 1 pralines for sale at the restaurant of Spero for 1 Silver each."
"You removed your listing of 96 pralines from the Restaurant of Spero!"
'Restaurant' should have a consistent capitalisation, I'd suggest lowercase, but either would work. I'd also suggest to un-pluralise 'pralines' from the first line, and rephrase the first one of them to:
"You put 1 praline up for sale at the restaurant of Spero for 1 Silver."
"You placed 1 pralines for sale at the restaurant of Spero for 1 Silver each."
"You removed your listing of 96 pralines from the Restaurant of Spero!"
'Restaurant' should have a consistent capitalisation, I'd suggest lowercase, but either would work. I'd also suggest to un-pluralise 'pralines' from the first line, and rephrase the first one of them to:
"You put 1 praline up for sale at the restaurant of Spero for 1 Silver."
BelSon- Seeker
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Re: IG Typos!
At the flooded quarry:
This old stone quarry is now completely flooded since the greed of one Dwarf took down the stone wall preventing the sea from entering the quarry.
This old stone quarry is now completely flooded since the greed of one Dwarf took down the stone wall preventing the sea from entering the quarry.
daradle- Seeker
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In the new Legio Rex description (boots):
"shattered" should say "scattered".
"shattered" should say "scattered".
Helfdane- Seeker
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Re: IG Typos!
On "The Shore" description, first line:
I can't believe we've never noticed it before...The water in front of you looks very vitalizing and seems to be be full of fish
daradle- Seeker
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Re: IG Typos!
Under Lady Ithycena's profile description:
"These are just tales of course, as nothing can possible wound Lord Arogandor!"
Should read "These are just tales, of course, as nothing can possibly wound Lord Arogandor!"
"These are just tales of course, as nothing can possible wound Lord Arogandor!"
Should read "These are just tales, of course, as nothing can possibly wound Lord Arogandor!"
Helfdane- Seeker
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Re: IG Typos!
As a Grail Keeper at the Tailoring Guild, the button to apply to teach says "Sent your application!" rather than "Send your application!"
daradle- Seeker
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