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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:04 pm

Tiny and trivial, but....



"You do not have any throphies yet.
Come back when you have killed something!"



"Trophies", perhaps?

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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:29 pm

Soup Kitchen Meal
You are not hungry enough to recieve a free bread meal!

receive

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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:40 pm

In 'Help'


Identify Item

Identify Item is an action you can perform on items that are for sale on the Private Market of a town.

Depending on your Identify Skill you will increase the chance of having a successful identification.
When the item is successfully identified by you, you will see all the available information of the item.

This is particularly useful when you are interested in buying items where durability matters (tools for example), because the Identify Item option will show you the actual durability of the identified item. Some merchants might dare to sell you items with a low durabilty for the same price as like it would be a new item.

Each try to identify will cost you 1 stamina.



durability

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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:44 pm

In 'Help'

Grail Seeker

An player of the Grail Lords.



A or Any?

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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:51 pm

Purchase Fundings
The daily purchase fundings is the maximum amount of money the town can spend on the town market on a daily base. The Purchase money can never be more then the current town treasury and can never drop below 0 during the day. Each day the town can change the purchase fundings for the next day.



than

possibly funding???


Last edited by Mellisa_Sarn on Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:18 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : haha...... fix typo)

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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 10:58 pm

Personal Character
Your Character represent your ingame avatar. It is who you are in the world of the Grail Lords.


represents

in game ??? possibly ingame is a slang word?

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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:10 pm

Meals
Meals are always created by using one or more food ingredients put together and cooked in a kitchen.

Your meals can be found at your Residence (click on the food at the wooden table of the picture).

Every day your hunger will increase, together with breads are meals the only way to decrease your hunger. Seekers with hunger will loose stamina and life-points over time.

Meals do not only decrease your hunger, they also increase your Personal Skills depending on the food ingredients that the meal contain.

...

Devour is eating when you are Fed already. When you devour you have a chance that you can eat a extra meal, Which grant you extra stats. However if you aren't used to eating that much (if your decadence isn't very high) you will probably throw the meal up. This means you won't gain the stats of that meal.



lose

contains

an

which



think I'll stop Embarassed

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Post by Guest Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:32 pm

I spotted a typo within your typo spotting Razz


Every day your hunger will increase, together with breads are meals
the only way to decrease your hunger. Seekers with hunger will loose stamina and life-points over time.

I believe that should be "Every day your hunger will increase, Meals and bread are the only the way to decrease your hunger"

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Post by Guest Tue Aug 30, 2011 1:28 am

Haha......... I am already going to be murdered for the list I just mailed....... you're welcome to the wounds from rephrasing the sentences Laughing


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Post by Lord Arogandor Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:17 pm

I'll fix those typos in the weekend Smile
Thanks for reporting.
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Post by Dracula Mon Jan 16, 2012 10:45 am

A Bored guard yawns while you pass the gate of
Camaar.
You now leave civilisation behind and start a journey into the big
wide world. Be warned! This is for real Adventurous Seekers only!





should that be like this
civilisation --> civilization?+some rephrasing


correct(?):
A bored guard yawns while you pass the gate of the town of
Camaar.
You now leave civilization behind and start a journey into the big
wide world. But be warned! This is for really adventurous Seekers only!

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Post by Guest Mon Jan 16, 2012 5:09 pm

Agreed about real -> really, but that's the correct spelling of civilisation.

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Post by TheHeirtotheThrone Mon Jan 16, 2012 6:35 pm

civilisation and civilization are both correct.
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Post by Helfdane Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:54 pm

TheHeirtotheThrone wrote:civilisation and civilization are both correct.

Go with the "z", be American Razz
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Post by Guest Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:23 am

Im not sure if Proffessor Dumbdore is deliberate or not, but else its spelt Dumbledore.

But if it is deliberate, can I suggest a slight change to Professor Dumblydore?

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Post by Lord Arogandor Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:31 am

It is currently spelled like Dumb Dore not dumbdore.
Dummydore or Dumblydore are also possibilities Smile

As long their is a hint to the Harry Potter Professor its good Smile
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Post by anto_capone Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:53 am

I understand (and like) the HP reference, but Dumb Dore makes him sound like he might be... dumb.

I like Airy's suggestions.

Of course my (evil) suggestion is:

DOOMbledore... Twisted Evil
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Post by Bracken Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:32 am

When taking something off the Item market, you get this:

You succesfully removed your listing from the market.


should be successfully

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Post by anto_capone Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:45 pm

Actually, it should be

"You have successfully removed your listing from the market."

For proper grammar sake
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Post by Helfdane Sun Jan 22, 2012 6:14 pm

anto_capone wrote:Actually, it should be

"You have successfully removed your listing from the market."

For proper grammar sake

"Actually, it should be:

"You have successfully removed your listing from the market."

For proper grammar's sake."

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Post by Bracken Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:04 pm

Surely that should depend on whether you are aiming for past imperfect or past perfect tense?

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Post by Guest Mon Jan 23, 2012 5:40 am

Eh...and here come the grammar police...*pulls a rope out tight so they trip over themselves* evil laugh!

You know, Doombledore could also work lol. Just anything but Dumb dore because our Dumbledore is not DUMB!!

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Post by anto_capone Mon Jan 23, 2012 6:59 pm

Helfdane wrote:
anto_capone wrote:Actually, it should be

"You have successfully removed your listing from the market."

For proper grammar sake

"Actually, it should be:

"You have successfully removed your listing from the market."

For proper grammar's sake."

affraid


d'oh! Razz

lol i dont like using proper grammar, my correction was on point tho Razz
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Post by Axel Ackland Mon Jan 23, 2012 7:18 pm

Doombledore can be Dumb dore's evil twin.

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Post by Lord Arogandor Tue Jan 24, 2012 5:55 pm

All the reported typo's here are corrected in the game now.

Doombledore sounds nice indeed! This really asks for an evil twin!
Dumb Dore will be chanced in
Dumblydore.

If an forum admin would like to sort this topic out, that would be much appriciated Smile

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