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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Aaron on Sat Oct 03, 2015 1:45 pm

Starting tomorrow, you will be able to throw the dices to claim your daily reward.

Dice. Die is the singular, dice is the plural.

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Dracula on Fri Oct 09, 2015 4:53 pm

So far 2 Candidate(s) did sent their application to become the new Town Leader of Spero.


did sent


So far 2 candidate(s) sent in their application to become the new town leader of Spero

(only So and Spero need capitals from start of sentence and names)

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Mon Oct 12, 2015 10:44 am

*fixed*

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Dracula on Sat Nov 28, 2015 5:25 pm

 27th of Nov 2015 21:04You did withdraw -Silver and -Bronze from your Bank Account.





You withdrew -gold -silver -bronze from your bank account.


you did
draw--> drew
no "and"
gold/silver/bronze/bank account aren't names so no caps

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Tue Dec 01, 2015 1:33 pm

*fixed*


Will keep the caps on the money.

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Helfdane on Fri Jan 01, 2016 2:01 pm

"The Town Bank is a massive stone building with small barred windows. Inside the bank you'll find the savings of the Seekers stored away secured behind the massive walls. Clerks keep track of all the depositions and withdraws."


It should read "deposits and withdrawals."


A deposition is a court-ordered testimony. 

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Sat Jan 02, 2016 5:56 pm

*fixed*

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by mbelegu on Mon Jan 04, 2016 7:47 pm

Your Library Pass of has been expired!


Should be
Your library pass has expired!

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Tue Jan 05, 2016 6:44 am

*fixed*

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Post by Helfdane on Fri Feb 19, 2016 1:20 am

"Grail Noblility"


Should read "Grail Nobility".

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Fri Feb 19, 2016 6:44 am

*fixed*

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Cpt_Coot on Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:24 pm

When looking at rank in skills section of character screen, your ranking always ends with "th".  Any number that ends in 1 should be "st", any that ends in 2 should be "nd", and any that ends in 3 should be "rd".   Otherwise its correct for all other numbers.

"You are ranked 63th in Charisma!"
Should be--"You are ranked 63rd in Charisma!"

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Helfdane on Mon Feb 22, 2016 3:27 am

When at the Ferry:

"Ticker Prize" should be "Ticket Price".

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Mon Feb 22, 2016 7:20 am

*fixed*

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Helfdane on Wed Mar 23, 2016 12:22 am

"To bad! Those are not five Udgars!"


Should read "Too bad"

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Cpt_Coot on Wed Mar 23, 2016 3:02 am

When regenerating at the town hospital, the confirmation message says "You have now x/y life points"
Should read "You now have x/y life points"

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Cpt_Coot on Wed Mar 23, 2016 3:03 am

On the minigame page, the goose game's thumbnail description reads:
Compete with three other Seekers and be the first to reach the treasure and claim your price!

Should read:
Compete with three other Seekers and be the first to reach the treasure and claim your prize!

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Wed Mar 23, 2016 6:17 am

*all fixed*

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Cpt_Coot on Fri Mar 25, 2016 3:26 am

Also, looking up in thread... goose game should read " compete with two other seekers..." , not 3.

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Fri Mar 25, 2016 5:20 am

There are four players in total with each game. So I think 3 is correct.

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Post by Cpt_Coot on Sun Mar 27, 2016 2:58 am

wow, don't know where i got that in my head that there were only 3 in each game, but I always have thought it was 3 lol.

So the second time you meet the bard, when he tells you that your poem did well and rewards you, the tense on what he says is clunky.  I saw it on my phone and lost the bit of paper I jotted down exactly what he said on, but there is a part at the end where he says "..maybe we meet again" I believe, which could be viewed as grammatically correct, but is weird sounding, and not anything anyone would say without making it "maybe we will meet again", or "may we meet again"

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Tue Mar 29, 2016 3:22 pm

*fixed*

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Helfdane on Tue Mar 29, 2016 4:30 pm

You deposited 1 Gold on your Bank Account


Should read "You deposited 1 Gold into your Bank Account".

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Helfdane on Tue Mar 29, 2016 7:12 pm

A bottle Wine (5 Popularity)


Should read "A bottle of Wine"

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Lord Arogandor on Wed Mar 30, 2016 5:24 am

*fixed*

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Re: IG Typos!

Post by Aaron on Tue May 03, 2016 11:34 pm

Last Week game:Camaar beated Spero

Beat. It's an irregular verb. Also, week's.
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