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Spotted Typo

Post by Marche on Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:44 pm

At the Town Bistro, it says 'Delicius Meals'. That should be 'Delicious Meals'

*fixed*
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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by Marche on Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:10 pm

I'll just add this in here. Two typo's I noticed during fighting (successful and dodge):

Round 4

You attacked and made a succesfull hit against the Broad Boar!
You did 5 damage to the Broad Boar!
You attacked and made a succesfull hit against the Broad Boar!
You did 6 damage to the Broad Boar!
You attack the Broad Boar but you didn't place a hit!
Succesful Dogde! The Broad Boar failed his attack!

Round 4

You attacked and made a successful hit against the Broad Boar!
You did 5 damage to the Broad Boar!
You attacked and made a successful hit against the Broad Boar!
You did 6 damage to the Broad Boar!
You attack the Broad Boar but you didn't place a hit!
Successful Dodge! The Broad Boar failed his attack!

EDIT: Hmm Now I'm looking at that report some more. Shouldn't it be:

You attacked the Broad Boar but you didn't place a hit!


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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by Marche on Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:58 pm

In a new fight now:

You attacked and made a succesfull hit against the Angry Bear!
You did 5 damage to the Angry Bear!
You attack the Angry Bear but you didn't place a hit!
The Angry Bear attacks and made a succesfull hit against you!
The Angry Bear does 4 damage to you!

It seems player / monster attacks are written in a different time. I figure it'd be nicer if it was both written in the present time.


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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by anto_capone on Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:21 pm

well done, appreciate your help here Smile
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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by TheHeirtotheThrone on Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:22 pm

lols at Anto making comments that dont add to the discussion but increase his post count...wait...
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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by anto_capone on Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:31 pm

shaddup james lol
i was working on this!

town office typos ect:

Design a Heraldry for your Town
You can upload a image that will represent your Town Heraldry. The image can't be bigger then 200x200 pixels!

Place your Town Motto
The Motto of a Town is that one sentence that identify's(should be identifies) the entire town. A good Motto or slogan is one of the keys for a succesful town.

Modify the Citizen Requirements
Here you can manage the requirements for persons (should be people) who wants (should be want, no s) to enter your town.

Followers Taxation
The Followers Taxation is a one of the ways for a town to earn some money. The Followers who got taxated from the town, calulate that tax in their price.

Rewrite:

Followers Taxation

Taxation of followers is a one of the ways for a town to earn some money. Followers who are taxed by the town, have the tax calculated in their price.


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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by TheHeirtotheThrone on Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:22 am

suuure Anto.

Leaving Sperò The bored guard tells you that, traveling is a very intense thing to do and that he can't let you pass the gates because you look too tired, he suggests that you return when you have more stamina.

Also an image on this page (http://www.thegraillords.net/images/heraldry/5.jpg) that doesnt exist.
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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by Lord Arogandor on Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:00 am

*grumphs*

THANKS for all the typos :rabbit: I'll fix them tonight all at once Wink

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Re: Spotted Typo

Post by Lord Arogandor on Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:15 pm

*all fixed* cheers

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