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Post by karel Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:18 am

Hello,

I have this new idea for my youtube channel!

This is one of the vids! cute kittens on beethoven!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmuKVYPXIr0

Tell me your opinion

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Post by Dracula Sat Feb 22, 2014 10:09 am

You want my opinion?,let me express it with a video of my own

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X05Xsh8NolE
(warning:slightly NSFW song,nothing too horrible)

0:40 to 0:47 is you


good luck with your youtube channel,i wouldn't hold your breath with getting your first subscriber
(nothing personal,i would say the same to a good friend)

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Post by karel Sat Feb 22, 2014 10:50 am

How About this? it's just a bit more original. look to the bit!

https://youtu.be/lZtxx1hCtHU

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Post by Dracula Sat Feb 22, 2014 12:32 pm

So,i'm just going to note down whats wrong with it while watching

-text with smilies
-text in general (commentary is better)
-black sidebars (in tandem with text,too much attention on the bottom of the screen)
-takes too long to get to the point
-only screenshots (its a video site,not a gallery)
- "some guy",do i even have to explain?
-omg? are you for real?
-blablabla stopped watching

overall boring and unoriginal content with a million mistakes

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Post by Dracula Sat Feb 22, 2014 12:39 pm

your video on starcraft has *some* potential,but full of mistakes as well

-no editing,cut out the first part (especially the loading) and showing file explorer/desktop is a no-no in videos that don't use the desktop (such as tutorials ect)
-you seem to have some lag,assuming you play on high quality turn it down to medium while recording(watch the brightness setting btw,its fine now but dont make it too dark)
-too much breathing in your mic,change setting to filter it out
-too slow paced,most starcraft matches are MUCH faster
-surrendering is not honorable

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Post by Drew Sat Feb 22, 2014 12:40 pm

If you like what you're doing keep going Karel.  Cool
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Post by karel Sat Feb 22, 2014 1:50 pm

Dracula wrote:your video on starcraft has *some* potential,but full of mistakes as well

-no editing,cut out the first part (especially the loading) and showing file explorer/desktop is a no-no in videos that don't use the desktop (such as tutorials ect)
-you seem to have some lag,assuming you play on high quality turn it down to medium while recording(watch the brightness setting btw,its fine now but dont make it too dark)
-too much breathing in your mic,change setting to filter it out
-too slow paced,most starcraft matches are MUCH faster
-surrendering is not honorable

I've been told I have an irritating voice, thats why i did the screenshot thing

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